Cherries

I was recently invited to Monday Poetry Train Revised, a site where you are encouraged weekly to submit any type of poem or prose you feel inspired to share. No prompts, so your mind is free to soar. Thank you to gautami tripathy for the invite and the wonderful site.

My first submission is an attempt at a Cinquain. I was very impressed reading some fellow writers cinquain poems so was inspired to write one myself.

 

 

Cherries

sweet chocolate

craving, dripping, sticky

tender sweetness share together

luscious.

 

 

 

 

9 Comments

  1. A delectable poem. I’m not sure if you intended it as a double entendre but it works really well without being too suggestive.

    • writetoday
    • Posted December 30, 2008 at 9:31 pm
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    Thank you Linda, it was fun to write especially with the double entendre.

  3. Delicious!

  4. Clever stuff! I think you’ve mastered the cinquain in one!

  5. I can taste the beauty of this experience. Thanks.

  6. I have been waiting to read a cinquain. This one is tasty and wonderful. Thanks

  7. Yum, so tempting
    great visuals
    Welcome to poetry train!
    I want to hold your hand

  8. Great cinquain!

    Welcome to poetry train!

    Have a great creative year 2009!

    playing for pleasing the moon

  9. Thanks Sweet Talking Guy and Jeeves, this was fun and I look forward to trying another.

    Thank you angie, Sandy, GeL.

    Thank you gautami tripathy for the chance to take a ride on the poetry train.


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