Betrayal of the Mind « Write Todays Weblog

Betrayal of the Mind

This week on 3WW the prompts are: deception panic scheme

I thought I would try something new that I came across on gautami.tripathy’s blog. It’s called a Butterfly Cinquain.

Betrayal of the Mind

Panic

anxious, fearful

falling, breathless, losing

schemes of illusion, betrayal

nightmare

black unconscious

screaming, grasping, drowning

deception stirred within madness

dying

- gautami tripathy
- Posted January 8, 2009 at 6:54 am
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You really described that feling of panic very well. The butterfly cinquain is a great way of doing it.

Thanks for the acknowledgement and the linking.

somebody watching you!
- floreta
- Posted January 8, 2009 at 3:35 pm
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this is very good.
i like how you start and end the piece.
- ThomG
- Posted January 8, 2009 at 4:51 pm
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Quite good.
- angel
- Posted January 9, 2009 at 4:09 am
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That was great! Made me nervous just reading it!